The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.
The bar diagram above compares both genders who are
illiteracy
in different locations. For the Replace the word
illiterate
last
year.
Overall
, it is clear that
females suffer more from illiteracy
. Especially in South Asia and the Arab States. While
developed countries have the lowest rates among the other.
Looking at the information in more detail, 60% of women
and 35% of men
in South Asia have evaluated that they can not read. In addition
, in Arab states shows that more than 50% of women
and less than 30% of men
have illiteracy
. Whereas
nearly 48% of women
and 30% of men
have illiteracy
in Sub-saharan Africa.
On the other hand
, Esat Asia has only 20% females and less than 10% of males who do not know how to read.. while
, in Latin America
the rates between Add a comma
America,
men
and women
were very close. 12% for females and 10% for males. As for developed countries
almost non-illiteracy
existent
.Replace the word
exists
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