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The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the rate of men above 18 who smoked in seven different states with the world average in 2000 and 2015. Generally speaking, the proportion of male
smokers
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 around the globe noticeably dropped throughout the years (approximately 41% compared to 33%) . Bangladesh witnessed the biggest decrease from about 62% in 2000 to 38% in 2015. Countries like Mexico and Australia
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 had similar tendencies.
Furthermore
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, these countries had the smallest rate of
smokers
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 among others during the years and these proportions were marginally smaller than in the world
overall
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.
In contrast
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, the biggest rate of
smokers
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 was in Armenia (about 66% in 2000),
although
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 it experienced a significant drop to 51%.
On the other hand
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, Egypt and Lebanon were the only countries where
proportions
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 of tobacco users had common patterns, increasing a little (15% and 10% respectively).
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, the percentage of men
smokers
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 in Cuba mostly remained flat, having a slight reduction from 53% to 51%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words smokers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart, percentage, adult male smokers
  • world average, increased, decreased
  • tobacco consumption, lung cancer
  • public health, awareness campaigns
  • government policy, smoking bans
  • health risks, nicotine, tobacco industry
  • chart analysis, data comparison
  • statistical trend, significant fluctuation
  • stagnation, steady rise, moderate fall
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