The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's corree and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's corree and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph indicates the proportion of the results of buying and drinking
coffee
and tea in five different cities in Australia in the
last
4 weeks. From an
overall
view, it is obvious that the least consumption of fresh
coffee
was in Sydney and instant
coffee
was used in both Briston and Adelaide,though, the most consumption of
coffee
and tea that
people
went to a cafe in Melbourne. On one hand,
people
bought net
coffee
for about 34 per
cent
in Brisbane and Adelaide for the
last
4 weeks;
however
, the most consuming net
coffee
was in Sydney around 43 per
cent
and Melbourne with approximately 42 per
cent
.
Furthermore
,
people
in Brisbon and Hobart bought the most amount of instant
coffee
in the
last
4 weeks around 53 per
cent
.
On the other hand
,It can be seen that
people
prefer to go to cafes to buy and drink
coffee
and tea, which was the least consumed by Adelaide approximately 54 per
cent
and the most were in
Melburne
Correct your spelling
Melbourne
about 63 per
cent
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