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Robots and artificial intelligence re being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

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Robots
in addition
 to artificial intelligence are being developed to replace
people
 in the workplace.the following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument. It is true that in some countries,
robots
 are being increased rather than inhabitants. As far as I am concerned I have seen a condition about robbat on the TV. If I say that there is a worker in a colonel factory who works as simple stuff
then
 his boss of the factory decided to change the system of production and immediately that employee wanted to get out of the job
however
 the man was poor and encountered disease. he has got two young children and beyond that his old parents.
Nevertheless
, the boss of the Colgel factory set up two
robots
. Those functions are very simple that as enmating boxes. Existing
robots
 in production are costly. In spite of
this
 if there are robbat system in your productions that will be good and pricy .
On the other hand
, setting up
robots
 to produce different kinds of stuff is on one side, in my opinion,
that is
 a little not good the particular reason for circumstances
instead
 of
robots
people
 with high qualifications they work well the principal they have got a mind and beyond that they are open-minded compared with
robots
 with
people
sometime
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sometimes
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robots
 prevail on the stuff of production. If there are a large number of
robots
 in order to produce a result,
this
 happens to lead to very bad results that
are decrease
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are decreasing
are decreased
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 in work hours, fees, and beyond that among other
people
 that lead to disappearing attention and
as a result
, many parts of the world's
people
 will get unemployed and
then
 they can not nourish their families. In conclusion, it seems to me that the range of techniques with staff should be balanced and balance is kept by the boss of the workplace.
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coherence cohesion
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