These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

the modern technologies have been easy living for us that have showed in jobs. today many
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people believe
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from
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and others do not
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idea.
while
there are some negative
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consequences
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flexibility
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would argue that these are outweighed by the
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advantages
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advantages of working at
home
but many
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people
do not
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accept
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this
way working in
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addition
they say
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way has many
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disadvantages
.
for instance
between 1995-1998 FG factory
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cars in
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that decided 15% of all
employees
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from
home
.
thus
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the quality
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of
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decreased
also
many customers
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complained
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company
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finally
the
company
gradually came back all of the
employees
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area for
work
.
therefore
this
part of
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people
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that have many strang
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experiences
about
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at
home
.
on the other hand
many
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people
and
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at university
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believe
that
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at
home
can help
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people
,
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society
and even
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the govverment
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govverment
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government
governments
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University
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experimented
presented
the most important in 1999. in
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the university 30% of all
employees
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to
work
at
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for 6
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month
months
and
as a result
they saw
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25
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%
performence
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performance
of
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.
this
study
also
showed customers
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satisfied
more than
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traditional management
.
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of
this
many
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are tending that the
employees
work
from
home
it has many
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advantages
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for
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company
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the company
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and
employees
for example
save money and time for both and they
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more time with family.
to sum up
,
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at
home
already is
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best
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way
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to save money and time and
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beleive
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believe
the upsides can justify these drawbacks.
therefore
it is clear that
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at
home
can help everyone and it is
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making progress in
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management
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. after
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analysis
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this
subject, it is predicted that the positive effect of working at
home
will always be greater than the negative effect.
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