The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The two rendered maps, which depict in great detail, illustrate the comparison between the middle of
Islip
town
at the present time and refurbishment in the future.
Overall
, it is clearly observable that few facilities are in Islip
town
centre
now, while
planned development for Islip
town
centre
shows that more facilities are being added in the future.
To commence with, now in the north of Islip
town
centre
has countryside, shops, main road and housing that main road is between two shops. In the southeast of Islip
town
centre
is one park in the south of Islip
town
centre
is housing as well as
in the southwest of Islip
town
centre
is a school.
On the flip side, after the planned renovation is shown that one dual carriageway in the Islip
town
centre
that in dual carriageway has added facilities such
as a bus station, shopping centre
, carpark, and two new housing in addition
to pedestrians only.Submitted by amirghhhhhh1999 on
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