You recently started commuting to work by bicycle and discovered that there is a problem with bicycle parking near the building where you work. Write a letter to the building manager. In your letter, •explain the reason for using a bicycle to commute •mention what problems you have encountered with parking •what you recommend to solve the problems
Dear Manager,
I am writing with regard to that because
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traffic Change preposition
of heavy
while
I go back home from work, it is
several weeks that I Wrong verb form
has been
prefere
to use my Correct your spelling
prefer
bicke
rather than my own car, and there is not enough parking space.
Recently I started to Correct your spelling
bike
attending in
an online computer programming course and it is even days at 18:00 o'clock. If I use my private car to transport between Wrong verb form
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wark
and home, it takes at least 2 Correct your spelling
work
houres
and I miss first 30 minutes of my class. so I have to Correct your spelling
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comute
by bicycle.
There is not enough space and I have to park in front of the cars. Correct your spelling
commute
Last
week a
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car
hitted
my Correct your spelling
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bicke
and I had to pay $100 to Correct your spelling
bike
back
repaire
it.
I would like to request, If it is possible for you Correct your spelling
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develop
the bicycle parking or provide Add the particle
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. I would Correct your spelling
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this
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.
I look forward to hearing your response.
Yours faithfully,
J.KhammarCorrect your spelling
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The letter covers all the necessary points: reason for cycling, problems encountered, and a recommendation for improvement.
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The tone of the letter remains polite and formal throughout, suited for a letter to a building manager.