The map shows the village park, now and 10 years ago. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the layouts of the village park currently and a decade ago.
Overall
, it is clear that
the village park has got more recreational facilities now. Also
, it become more crowded compared to the past ten years.
The tennis court which is located at the top of the map has become bigger about twofold now. Beside the tennis court,there was a children's play area which is divided into two areas now. Notably, a toilet is added now next to the current c pla children's self-play area. It is noteworthy that the car parking which is located at the left of the map,
has become threefold bigger than past ones which are suitable for 60 cars now.
The football pitch which can be seen in the middle of the maps has become smaller compared to the past. Remove the comma
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In addition
, a picnic area is added to the current layout of the village. Interestingly, there was a pond in past, which was attached closely to the football pitch. The pond is replaced with a boating lake now. Moreover
, a cafe is built on the current map. It is considerable that the entrance has remained unchanged during these ten years.Submitted by Maral.qanbarii1992 on
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