The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table gives
the
information and data about the number of five well-known brands of mobile phones sold in millions for a Correct article usage
apply
period
of six years
from 2006 to 2012. According to
these data, the market share for Nokia increased vastly in the first 3 years
but slightly fell in the next few years
to 5 percent
less than the amount it was at the beginning. Change the spelling
per cent
Although
Nokia had a first position during this
period
, the last
year in which Samsung passed it in 2012. The extreme change is related to Motorola and Apple which relevantly plunged to ten percent
of the market share after six Change the spelling
per cent
years
and peaked sixty times during the same period
of time. Ericsson had a
more or less Correct article usage
apply
same
trend Correct article usage
the same
like
Nokia, it had a high increase in the first half of Change preposition
as
this
period
and then
fell dramatically at the end
. Among other brands
Samsung had a steady path of increase in the number of mobile phones sold during those Add a comma
brands,
years
. It started from 117 in 2006 up to 396.5 in 2012 with the same slope on
each year.Change preposition
apply
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