Your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project he/she is doing about celebrating New Year in different countries. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say how important New Year is to people in your country • describe how New Year is celebrated in your country • explain what you like about New Year celebrations in your country
Dear Jack,
I hope you're doing well! I'm writing
this
letter to give you some thoughts for your project about how New Year
is celebrated in Russia.
To begin
with
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with,
this
holiday is the most popular in our country. For many families
it's the only time in the Add a comma
families,
year
when they can get together and meet some of their relatives and friends.
Because of its family vibe most of
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apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
russians
celebrate New Change the capitalization
Russians
Year
at home, having a
dinner, Correct article usage
apply
waiting
for Correct word choice
and waiting
the
midnight when the Kremlin clocks will beat 12 times. At Correct article usage
apply
this
moment everyone makes a wish and yelling
"Happy New Wrong verb form
yells
Year
!". After that many people go outside, set off fireworks and walking
until the morning, which is a sign of Wrong verb form
walk
Correct article usage
a succesfull
succesfull
celebration.
Correct your spelling
successful
However
, what I really like in New Year
is the time before 31st December, when everyone in the holiday rush searches for gifts, buying
food and again, Wrong verb form
buys
meet
each other. I like Correct subject-verb agreement
meets
such
atmosphere
, it brings me back to my childhood and Correct article usage
an atmosphere
unveal
pleasant memories about how we have celebrated Correct your spelling
unveils
this
day in the previous years.
You know what, at any chance, if you would like to visit us during New Year
Holidays I'll be very happy.
Best wishes, VladSubmitted by batashevge on
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The letter maintains a warm and friendly tone throughout, making it suitable for a personal letter.
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The letter includes personal opinions and experiences, enriching the description of New Year in Russia.