Task 2 : Some people think that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others believe that businesses mainly benefit. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today’s world, the international partnership has increased more and more. It is argued that

this

is to protect our planet, whilst others strongly claim that booming business is the main target.

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essay agrees that worldwide cooperation is beneficial for merchandising in the headline.

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is clear that cooperation between

countries

from all over the world would aim to support the protection of the environment. In the

last

decade, some

environment

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environmental

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issues like global warming and the consistent research of new types of sources of energy became a real subject of interest

as well as

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serious trouble for all the nations. From that, a close collaboration between

countries

, especially

super power

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nations, became necessary. Indeed, the finding of sustainable solutions,

for instance

,

renewables

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energies and the manufacturing of environmentally friendly goods

became

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undoubtedly the

principle

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challenge human beings have to overcome. The financial help some

countries

would allow to undeveloped nations, aiming to push forward the interest of these lasts, is a prime example of the importance of collaboration in the managing of environmental troubles we are facing.

However

, alongside these advantages, come certain drawbacks that can’t be overlooked. In fact, the background of international partnerships would hide more interests

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dealing with

environment

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. The

so called

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«international community” has the power the change

her

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own orientation in terms of

economical

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politics and laws but

furthermore

, get involved In other

countries

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concerns through the door of

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“

environment

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environmental

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protection”. Some products,

for instance

, are not necessarily sold because of their environmentally friendly feature, but mainly to take the lead in the concerned sector. The most noticeable example is electrical cars that consume electricity, which is produced by fossil energy.

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electrical

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car is far more pollution than a standard vehicle. To summarize, an international collaboration may benefit to deal with environmental perennity. The surge in business and economy stands

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prime target though. In my point of view, both are crucial and a healthy earth goes inescapably

trough

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healthy finances.