The three pie charts below shows the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001.
The pie charts represent the proportion of the UK
schools
' spending in several sectors in three decades starting from 1981 to 2001.
In 1981, schools
spent 40% of their income on teachers
' salaries
, this
was the highest spending in 1981, followed by workers' salaries
, which were 28%. They only spent 15% on books, furniture, and equipment. Schools
only spent 2% on insurance
, which was the lowest spending among other sectors.
A decade later, half of the schools
' spending was on teachers
' salaries
, yet, they decreased workers' salaries
to 22%. The percentage of spending on books increased to 20%. On the other side, the spending on furniture and equipment had declined by 10%. The schools
increased their spending on insurance
by 1%.
However
, in 2001, the proportion of teachers
' salary
had decreased by 5% and workers' Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
salaries
by 7%. Spending on resources had declined by 11%. Nonetheless
, spending on furniture and equipment had drastically increased to 23%. There was a slight increase in insurance
, which had a rateof
8%.
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rate of
To sum up
, there were some changes in schools
' annual spending. Nevertheless
, most spending was on teachers
' salaries
and they had the least spending on insurance
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