The graph below shows the satisfaction raiting of the staff in four colledges from 1991 to 2002

The graph illustrates staff satisfaction levels across four colleges, A, B,
C
, and D. The graph covers a
period
of eleven years (from 1991 to 2002).
College
A
initially
enjoyed the highest satisfaction rating, exceeding 60% and two times higher than the lowest-rated
College
C
, which experienced a downward trend during the
period
. It peaked in 1995 at 79%,
then
varied around 60% until 2000, but
then
fell to 40% by 2002.
In contrast
,
College
D maintained a quite stable satisfaction rating. It fluctuated around 40% for most of the
period
before declining to 20% by 2002.
College
B maintained a significant upward trend. After early fluctuations, it steadily increased from 50% to 70% by 2002. By the way, it gained a 20% improvement over 1995. In comparison,
College
C
started with the lowest rating, under 30%, and continued on a downward trend, afterwards it hit a low of 10% in 1998.
However
, the situation turned around remarkably in 1999, with a sevenfold increase in rating.
College
C
steadily improved and finished the
period
at 80%, placing it as the top-rated
college
.
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