The chart below shows how in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The provided bar chart demonstrates the
frequency
of consuming convenience
food
at restaurants by individuals in the USA over a period of 10 years.
overall
,
it is clear that
all three bars have upward trends between 2003 - 2006 and
a downward ones
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downward ones
a downward one
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between the years 2006 - 2013. It is
also
shown that the consumption of fast
food
once a week in 2006 had the same
frequency
as eating once or twice a month in 2013. A glance at the bar chart reveals that having junk
food
once a week
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the most common
frequency
in 2006, reaching
at
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the
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peak of approximately 34%. The
frequency
of daily unhealthy
food
concumption
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consumption
was the same in both 2006 and 2013, by approximately 3% which is regarded as the least one and
similarily
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similarly
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it was around 4% in 2003. Ultimately, no fast
food
was consumed in 2003, 2006, and 2013, by 5%, 4%,
4
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and 4
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%, respectively.
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