The chart below shows how in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The provided bar chart demonstrates the
frequency
of consuming convenience food
at restaurants by individuals in the USA over a period of 10 years.
overall
, it is clear that
all three bars have upward trends between 2003 - 2006 and a downward ones
between the years 2006 - 2013. It is Correct the article-noun agreement
downward ones
a downward one
also
shown that the consumption of fast food
once a week in 2006 had the same frequency
as eating once or twice a month in 2013.
A glance at the bar chart reveals that having junk food
once a week saw
the most common Verb problem
was
frequency
in 2006, reaching at
Remove the preposition
apply
the
peak of approximately 34%. The Correct article usage
a
frequency
of daily unhealthy food
concumption
was the same in both 2006 and 2013, by approximately 3% which is regarded as the least one and Correct your spelling
consumption
similarily
it was around 4% in 2003. Ultimately, no fast Correct your spelling
similarly
food
was consumed in 2003, 2006, and 2013, by 5%, 4%, 4
%, respectively.Correct word choice
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