The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarize and information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarize and information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the manufacturing process of
cement
and its use to produce concrete.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the manufacturing process of
cement
consists of 5 steps beginning with crashing limestone and clay and ending with bagging
cement
. The second production of concrete requires ingredients
such
as
cement
, sand, gravel, and water. Both of them are done automatically, including necessary equipment: a crusher, a mixer, a rotating heater, a grinder, and bags.
First,
limestone and clay are crushed into a powder and
then
passed through the mixer and rotating heater which is supplied by heat. After, it is ground by the grinder, making
cement
ready for
further
packaging into bags. In the second graph, in order to manufacture concrete, 15% of
cement
, 25% of sand, 10% of water , and 50% of gravel are poured into a concrete mixer which is the final step for the usage in the construction industry.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cement with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • raw materials
  • ground into a powder
  • rotating heater
  • clinker
  • packaged in bags
  • concrete production
  • specified proportions
  • concrete mixer
  • building purposes
  • blended
  • limestone
  • clay
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