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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The given maps illustrate the layout of Southwest Airport now and its future plans for the next year.
Overall
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, the airport will see huge reconstruction and expansion with significant changes. It can be seen that the main building is divided into two parts: for departures with its check-in in the west, a cafe in the east and Security Passport Control on the left side and arrivals with Passport Control Customs on the right, which leads to 8 Gates with Walkway.
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 the plans, the place will be dramatically changed by reconstructing and expanding Gates into 18 with its Sky Train. On the departure side of the building, the cafe and check-in will be swapped and a new bag stop will be opened,
as well as
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 shops to the north.
On the other hand
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, a new cafe, ATM and car hire will be constructed on the arrivals side by expanding the building.
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, two Passport Controls will stay unchanged.
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coherence cohesion
Consider adding a more detailed conclusion to summarize the changes and their impact.
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Ensure that all changes are clearly linked to the respective parts of the map for easy understanding.
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Provide specific examples where possible, such as naming new facilities introduced.
coherence cohesion
The description of the current airport layout is clear and easy to understand.
task achievement
The essay successfully highlights major changes planned for the airport redevelopment.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • terminal
  • car park
  • runways
  • redevelopment
  • proposed changes
  • expanded terminals
  • new gates
  • additional parking
  • amenities
  • navigation
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • traffic congestion
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