The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Two maps display the community called Bunborough nowadays and in the predicted future in Autumn 2024.

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, it is projected that the village will become more industrialised and more friendly to new visitors throughout the years. It will

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gain new infrastructure. In the north of a river, houses will change their locations to make their way to a new railway station. In the far northeast, a new house will be built. In the north of a lake, a new hotel will be constructed too.

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, a fishing port will be substituted with a promenade.

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, in the south, a new road from Lyndwich to the prime parts of the community in the north is predicted to be built. The railway is forecasted to start in the south and to go to the north, crossing over roads a few times.

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, another hotel between a beach and the railway is assumpted to be constructed.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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4 paragraphs

157 words

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The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Differences between countries are becoming less evident. Nowadays people watching the same films, fashion, brands, advertisements and TV channels. To what extent do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?

Some people think that cities are the best places to live. Others prefer to live in rural areas. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days people in some countries are living in a “throwaway” society which means people use things in a short time then throw them away. What do you think is the cause and what problem will it lead to?

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sprots to younger children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?