You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The flowchart depicts the stages of producing ethanol gasoline from corn plants.
Overall
, the process of manufacturing corn into alcohol fuel comprises seven steps, starting from storing the raw material to storing the gas before it is ready to be transported.
To begin
with, corn needs to be stored before it is ready to use. After that, the material is crushed using a milling machine.
Next,
the substances are mixed with water to be cooked for 4 hours. Later, the mixture is fermented for 48 hours before being processed to the next steps. In the following phase, the result from fermentation is divided into 2 categories which are solid and fluid proceeds. The solid outcome is not needed
while
the liquid yield is purified for 5 hours to gain the end product of pure alcohol fuel ready for storage.
Last
but not least, the final product is ready to be delivered to the buyer or whoever needs it.
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