IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7

The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#movement #people #areas #three #countries #predictions #summarise #information #features #comparisons
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The line
graph
Use synonyms
 illustrates the number of citizens moving from village to city areas in Iran, Indonesia, and Russia, and
also
Linking Words
 shows the rate of how it will change in 2025. Units are measured in millions.
Overall
Linking Words
, what stands out from the chart is that all the three countries show an upward
trend
Use synonyms
 from beginning to
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
end
Use synonyms
,
while
Linking Words
 Iranian shows that the highest amount of villagers will move to the urban areas.
To begin
Linking Words
 with, from 2000 to 2005 Iranian public moved to the city just
a
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
small amount from below 10 to just reaching 10
million
Use synonyms
.
This
Linking Words
graph
Use synonyms
 shows a rapid surge from 2005 to 2000 and will reach the highest point of about 96
million
Use synonyms
 in the
last
Linking Words
 year.
Additionally
Linking Words
, Russian citizens experienced an upward
trend
Use synonyms
 beginning to the
end
Use synonyms
 starting from just over 10
million
Use synonyms
 and ending with about 89
million
Use synonyms
 in the
end
Use synonyms
.
Furthermore
Linking Words
,
this
Linking Words
graph
Use synonyms
 intersects the line of Iran in 2020 at the point of 80
million
Use synonyms
.
Indonesian
Correct your spelling
Indonesia
show examples
 showed an upward
trend
Use synonyms
 until 2000 reaching 10
million
Use synonyms
 to 30
million
Use synonyms
 in numbers in 2000 and crossed the Irani
graph
Use synonyms
 in around 2007 at about 17
million
Use synonyms
. After that,
this
Linking Words
graph
Use synonyms
 showed a slightly downward
trend
Use synonyms
 and will
end
Use synonyms
 at about 29
million
Use synonyms
 in 2050.
Submitted by jisan.path1506605 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, trend, end, million with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 5 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 6 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: