Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 2
The map illustrates two different proposed sites, S1 and s2, for the construction of a new shopping mall in the
city
of Use synonyms
Brandfield
.
Looking at the Use synonyms
overall
perspective, it can be seen that Linking Words
both
locations are near the Use synonyms
city
Use synonyms
centre
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, there is a Linking Words
railway
and a road running through the Use synonyms
city
casually.
To start with, S1, in the north of the Use synonyms
city
, is located between the housing estate and the Use synonyms
city
Use synonyms
centre
. It is Use synonyms
also
a place where surrounded by the river, roads and the Linking Words
railway
. What should be noticed is that Use synonyms
in contrast
with S2, S1 is closer to the river which flows from the southwest to the north.
S2, situated in the south of Linking Words
Brandfield
, is the other option. It is in the middle of a road and Use synonyms
railway
. Meanwhile, S2 is close to the industrial estate and the Use synonyms
city
Use synonyms
centre
. Use synonyms
Both
S1 and S2 are far away from the golf course and park.
In summary, Use synonyms
both
two sites are close to the Use synonyms
city
Use synonyms
centre
. At the same time, S1 is in the northern part of Use synonyms
Brandfield
; Use synonyms
however
, S2 is in the southern part of Linking Words
Brandfield
. Use synonyms
In addition
, these two sites are Linking Words
both
near the road and the Use synonyms
railway
, Use synonyms
while
S1 is Linking Words
moreover
adjacent to the river.Linking Words
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