The line graph compares the proportion of the population of 4 different countries in Asia living in cities between 1970 and 2020, with projection to 2040.
The line chart gives information about the proportion of
people
living in cities
from 4 different countries in Asia, namely the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia, in percentage
, over a 51-year period from 1970 to 2020, with a prediction to 2040.
It can clearly be seen that there was an increase in the population of all four countries. This
percentage
of the total population is projected to continue climbing in the next 20 years.
In 1970, Indonesia was the country
that took the smallest percentage
of the number of people
living in cities
, at about 15%. However
, this
country
overcame the second country
which took the high proportion of people
residing in urban areas, at nearly 50%. In addition
, Philippines took the first place in 1970 with about 32% of total people
living in cities
, but it dropped to third place in 2020, at 45%.
Moreover
, the Philippines is predicted to continue to increase in the upcoming 20 years, and it also
stays at the third position with the expected proportion at 55%. Besides
, Malaysia is the country
which has a substantial climb in the percentage
of people
in cities
compared to others; and it is also
projected to take the first prize in 2040, at 80%. During the 51-year period since the 1970s, although
the percentage
of all the
four countries has fluctuated change, they still have an increase in general.Correct article usage
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