The line graph compares the proportion of the population of 4 different countries in Asia living in cities between 1970 and 2020, with projection to 2040.

The line chart gives information about the proportion of

people

living in

cities

from 4 different countries in Asia, namely the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia, in

percentage

, over a 51-year period from 1970 to 2020, with a prediction to 2040. It can clearly be seen that there was an increase in the urban of all four countries.

This

group of the total population is projected to continue climbing in the next 20 years. In 1970, Indonesia was the country that had the smallest

percentage

of the number of

people

living in

cities

, at about 15%.

However

, in 2020 Indonesia became the country with the

second largest

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percentage

of

people

residing in urban areas, at nearly 50%.

In contrast

, the Philippines took

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first place in 1970 with about 32% of total

people

living in

cities

, but it dropped to third place in 2020, at 45%. Regarding, the urban population of the Philippines is predicted to continue to increase in the upcoming 20 years, at about 55% by 2040.

Besides

, Malaysia is the country which has the most

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substantial climb in the

percentage

of

people

in

cities

compared to others; and

this

number is

also

projected to take the first place in 2040, at 80%. During the 51-year period since the 1970s

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although

the percentages of all the four countries

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fluctuated, they still have an increase in general.