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The chart below shows Th amount of tea and coffee imported into Canada, Uk, USA and Germony in 2007 in tonnes

The chart below shows Th amount of tea and coffee imported into Canada, Uk, USA and Germony in 2007 in tonnes
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The bar chart provides information about the figures for imported
tea
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 and
coffee
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 that took place in Canada, the UK, the USA, and Germany in the year 2007 by tonnes.
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, at first glance, imported
tea
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 in the UK experienced an upward trend
while
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coffee
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 showed a downward trend during the period.
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 is considered the most common of imported in
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the
by 13000 tonnes. At the same
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 the USA ranked in the second position in imported
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 about 9000 tonnes. Canada and Germany had
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the lowest
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imported
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in
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tea
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 approximately 4000 and 6000
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tonnes
 respectively.
In contrast
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, imported
coffee
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 in
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Canada
 and the USA was the highest comparison to other countries.
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, the
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UK
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 and Germany
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accounted
of
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decline
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the decline
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 in imported
coffee
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 to almost 7000 and 5000 to
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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