Smoking is injurious to our health.
And inCorrect word choice
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fewCorrect article usage
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it is not permitted to smoke in
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public
areas
and office properties which implies
to maintainChange the verb form
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a healthy environment
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all. I am strongly in
favorChange the spelling
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of
this
rule and it can be applied in every country to
the
overall
smoking rate.
Firstly
, we all know smoking causes a lot of health problems like breathing problems and respiratory
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including the
life threateningAdd a hyphen
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disease cancer. The person nearby the smoker gets more affected by smoking
the smoker himself.
For example
,
countryAdd an article
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like Singapore they imposed a very strict law for
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smoker who smokes in
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public
areaFix the agreement mistake
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. And if they
caughtAdd a missing verb
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then
they need to pay a huge amount of money as
fineCorrect article usage
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. There are designated
areas
in the city, where people can smoke without harming others. And the
citizenFix the agreement mistake
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and the
touristFix the agreement mistake
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abide by
thatCorrect determiner usage
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rules.
Secondly
, smoking in public
areas
such
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parkFix the agreement mistake
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, public transportation,
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institutionFix the agreement mistake
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can have a negative health impact on passersby. Sometimes
and older people come to the park and if they find out the smell they will be irritated and uncomfortable. Previously in Bangladesh, people
smokeWrong verb form
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inChange preposition
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the bus. And the passengers got really disturbed by
this
act.
Then
the
imposed
the aChoose an article
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law that smoking is
in
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public
areas
. In office
areas
also
other employees
gotVerb problem
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affected by diseases
forChange preposition
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smoking.
In conclusion, I would say that imposing
this
rule actually
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a better environment for everyone. It will have a positive impact
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not only
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environmentAdd an article
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but
also
inChange preposition
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every human's life.