The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
The bar chart illustrates the number of
hours
spent by different
tourists
in Greece in the summer of 2019. At first sight, we can divide the four countries into two groups: the first
group
contains China and America with a significant preference for reading
books
,
while
the second
group
involves Turkish and Brazil, which participants prefer to exercise at the beach. The
last
activity favoured by both groups is visiting places.
Firstly
, the comparison in the first
group
. Chinese
tourists
average about 8
hours
reading
books
, 3
hours
at the seaside and around
1 hour
Add a hyphen
1-hour
show examples
knowing areas,
while
American
tourists
spend 5
hours
with
books
, 4
hours
at the beach and 3
hours
visiting places.
Secondly
, more details of the second
group
. It can be seen that Turkish visitors would rather do things at the seaside, around 4
hours
reading
books
and 3
hours
staying in spots in Greece.
Additionally
, Brazilian people show that spent more time at the beach with 6
hours
, 4
hours
with
books
, and 2
hours
stopping in different places.
To sum up
, the graphic shows different exercises done by different
tourists
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, tourists, group, books with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average number
  • leisure activities
  • tourists
  • nationalities
  • cultural trends
  • interests
  • vacation
  • influence
  • participation
  • impact
  • weather
  • events
  • festivals
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