The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
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doing activities Correct your spelling
different tourists
while
on holiday in Greece in summer
of 2019.
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the summer
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, the graphic shows a marked peak of Brazilians
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tourists
beach
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the beach
Americans
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tourists
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the beach
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tourists
spent
more hours reading books in Greece, followed by Americans. Turkish and Brazilians had the same number of hours spent reading a book.
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majority
prefered
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Chinese
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different
tourist
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tourists
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different
prefered
to do in Greece in August 2028.Correct your spelling
preferred
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