The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied graphs depict the consistency of
fish
pie
and its production.
Overall
, the pie
consists of 4 different products and the process of manufacturing it
divided into 2 steps.
The product, namely Correct your spelling
is
fish
pie
arranged in a microwaveable package, and the structure of this
dish comprises various things. The first thing is a potato that is
located on the surface of food. The rest products are under
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the
Correct article usage
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potato
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potatoes
fish
and peas. Finally
, the pie
is filled with sauce.
The process of making those pies started with the potato, which needed to be cleaned and peeled, then
, the slices of them boiled and went to the wrapping zone. The second step is about delivery which takes 12 hours. Subsequently
, the salmon was pickled with lemon juice and salt and went to the oven to be cooked. Following
this
, employees removed the bones and skin of the fish
and will be inspected by the controller. At the end
, salmon, peas and tomatoes with potatoes were wrapped in some containers.Submitted by a.seytzhanova on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, pie with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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