Many people think that land in the city should be used for residence while others think that we should use land for parks and community places. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The factor which measures the development of a country is the arrangement of the cities of that country. Some positive impact on social development.
people
believe that the city
should be used for only residential areas, whereas
other argues that it will be a place
for both parks
and the community
. In this
essay, I will discuss both perceptions and in my opinion, I think the city
will be a place
for residence as well as
it has a space
for parks
and a place
for social discussion.
Proponents believe that the city
will be a place
for residence where people
will maintain a healthy lifestyle by cutting down on various types of pollution
. Again, the city
centre sometimes not be so spacious and as a result
people
live a life which is congested where there is a narrow space
between two buildings. Moreover
, the density of the population is increasing day by day and for this
burgeon, people
need more places to build new buildings. consequently
, different types of pollution
such
as air pollution
, and noise pollution
are accelerated in an obvious range. For example
, Dhaka is an overpopulated city
in Bangladesh here population are out of capacity , and if it creates a place
for parks
and social community
centres it would be totally detrimental to people
who already live here.So, sometimes it will be thought that the city
will serve as only residential areas.
Opponents believe that a city
which has been requires a specific place
where people
will go to some relaxation and take a deep breath with greenery and the local community
will be gathered
to share their ideas and information which haveWrong verb form
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Moreover
, city
life is a boring life so if there is a free space
children will go there for their regular play and it will be helped for different age groups people
by doing their regular physical exercise which plays a crucial role in case of diminishing obesity. To cite an example, Some city
corporations take action in this
regard so that there will be a park so
that Correct word choice
apply
people
visit there for relaxation as well as
to minimize health issues such
as obesity , and diabetes.
To conclude
a city
would be an ideal place
for habitat if there is a place
for residence buildings, space
for parks
and a community
where people
will gather in their free time to retain future communication.Submitted by priankajun on
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task achievement
In the introduction, clearly state your opinion along with the balanced representation of both views.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph transitions smoothly to maintain cohesion.
coherence cohesion
Strengthen connections between main points and examples in paragraphs for better clarity.
task achievement
The essay provides a balanced discussion of both perspectives on land use.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are succinct, framing the essay well.
task achievement
Specific examples are used effectively to illustrate points, notably the example of Dhaka.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.