Many people think that land in the city should be used for residence while others think that we should use land for parks and community places. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The factor which measures the development of a country is the arrangement of the cities of that country. Some

people

believe that the

city

should be used for only residential areas,

whereas

other argues that it will be a

place

for both

parks

and the

community

. In

this

essay, I will discuss both perceptions and in my opinion, I think the

city

will be a

place

for residence

as well as

it has a

space

for

parks

and a

place

for social discussion. Proponents believe that the

city

will be a

place

for residence where

people

will maintain a healthy lifestyle by cutting down on various types of

pollution

. Again, the

city

centre sometimes not be so spacious and

as a result

people

live a life which is congested where there is a narrow

space

between two buildings.

Moreover

, the density of the population is increasing day by day and for

this

burgeon,

people

need more places to build new buildings.

consequently

, different types of

pollution

such

as air

pollution

, and noise

pollution

are accelerated in an obvious range.

For example

, Dhaka is an overpopulated

city

in Bangladesh here population are out of capacity , and if it creates a

place

for

parks

and social

community

centres it would be totally detrimental to

people

who already live here.So, sometimes it will be thought that the

city

will serve as only residential areas. Opponents believe that a

city

which has been requires a specific

place

where

people

will go to some relaxation and take a deep breath with greenery and the local

community

will

be gathered

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positive impact on social development.

Moreover

,

city

life is a boring life so if there is a free

space

children will go there for their regular play and it will be helped for different age groups

people

by doing their regular physical exercise which plays a crucial role in case of diminishing obesity. To cite an example, Some

city

corporations take action in

this

regard so that there will be a park

so

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that

people

visit there for relaxation

as well as

to minimize health issues

such

as obesity , and diabetes.

To conclude

a

city

would be an ideal

place

for habitat if there is a

place

for residence buildings,

space

for

parks

and a

community

where

people

will gather in their free time to retain future communication.