The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

#percentage #households #accomodation #england #wales

The chart illustrates how

people

in the UK especially in England and Wales

having

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have had

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a type of

households

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household

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for the past 93 years since 1918. The number of

the

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apply

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people

are

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counted in

percentage

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percentages

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per

decade

. There are two types of how

british

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British

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people

own

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apply

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accomodation

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accommodation

in their hometown,

which owned

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own

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the

accommodation

rented

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rent

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the

accommodation

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shows that throughout the years

people

live

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who live

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in England and Wales

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are more

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likely to build or

bought

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buy

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house

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a house

the house

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for

the

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living rather than rent from someone else. In the first

decade

, individuals used to like

for

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apply

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renting a place to live, but for the next

six

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six-decade

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decade

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decade,

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there was a sharp decrease of persons that charter an

accommodation

while

the number of households owning an

accommodation

rapidly rocketed and

reach

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reached

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a peak in 2001. But there is a

slightly

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slight

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change

happened

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that happened

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in 2011 where they both

having

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had

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a slight downward and upward for each, there must be something

happened

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that happened

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between 2001 and 2011 that

make

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made

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some of them change their mind

for

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about

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having

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apply

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owned

accommodation

rented

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rent

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from others.

However

, it can be concluded that

people

who live in England and Wales in

this

decade

prefer to build their own place to live.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, decade, accommodation with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

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I didn't have any nightmare travel experiences, but my friend has had such an experience.

In many countries nowadays,consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative?