The table below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The given table provides data about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
Overall
, as can be seen, bananas were sold in the UK more than in other countries in 2004 whereas
coffee was sold in Switzerland more than in others in 2004.
Looking more closely at the banana's table, it is clear that
, Switzerland experienced significant growth from 3 to 6 million
euros
. After that, the third furthest difference took place in 2004 in Belgium with 0.7 million
euros
. Additionally
, there was a minimal rise from 1.8 and 0.8 million
euros
in 1998 to 2 and 1 million
euros
in 2004 in Sweden and Denmark respectively.
On the other side, a look at the coffee table reveals that the United Kingdom with a 4.5 million
euros
increase had the second most variation in 2004. The sales in Belgium followed by a gentle rise from 0.6 million
euros
in 1998 to 4 million
euros
in 2004. Finally
, Sweden increased by 0.2 million
euros
and reached 1 million
euros
in 2004 however
Denmark had a dramatic drop from 2 million
euros
in 1998 to 0.8 million
euros
in 2004.Submitted by benyaminzademoradian1378 on
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