Nowadays many people go shopping in their free time. Shopping has replaced many other activities that people used to choose as their hobby. what are the reason for this. Is this a positive or negative development?

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In recent years, some

individuals

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prefer to spend their

leasure

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leisure

time

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shopping

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of other activities and consider it as

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hobby.

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essay will discuss that a viable reason for

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phenomenon is

consumerism

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and

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Nowadays many people go shopping in their free time. Shopping has replaced many other activities that people used to choose as their hobby. what are the reason for this. Is this a positive or negative development?

Your opinion

Describe a rule that is important in your school or at work.

Scientists predict in the near future cars will be driven by computers, not people. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of many species & loss of biodioversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solution can be done to to solve it?

In some countries, i is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age. Is this a positive or negative development?