The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
diagram illustrates the process of converting uranium into nuclear power.
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Overall
, it is clearly seen that Linking Words
this
is a human-made non-cyclic process, which contains 6 stages, beginning with Linking Words
mining
of uranium and ending with Correct article usage
the mining
burial
of used fuel
Add an article
the burial
First
stage is Change the article
The first
extraction
of uranium from the earth. After Add an article
the extraction
that
Add a comma
that,
this
material is enriched and converted to the U-235, which is saved in small pieces of fuel. Linking Words
Next
step is sending Correct article usage
The next
this
fuel to the nuclear power plant and using it to produce energy from it. After about 4 years most of U-235 are not able to be used anymore. Because of that a small part Linking Words
is send
to be re-processed and Change the verb form
is sent
re-used
, Correct your spelling
reused
while
the other, which is not able to produce Linking Words
anymore
energy, is collected in the containers and buried.Replace the word
any more
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