The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
diagram illustrates the process of converting uranium into nuclear power.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that
this
is a human-made non-cyclic process, which contains 6 stages, beginning with
mining
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the mining
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of uranium and ending with
burial
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the burial
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of used fuel
First
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The first
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stage is
extraction
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the extraction
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of uranium from the earth. After
that
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that,
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this
material is enriched and converted to the U-235, which is saved in small pieces of fuel.
Next
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The next
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step is sending
this
fuel to the nuclear power plant and using it to produce energy from it. After about 4 years most of U-235 are not able to be used anymore. Because of that a small part
is send
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to be re-processed and
re-used
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reused
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,
while
the other, which is not able to produce
anymore
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energy, is collected in the containers and buried.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nuclear fission
  • Radioactive material
  • Reactor core
  • Control rods
  • Coolant
  • Thermal energy
  • Steam generator
  • Turbine
  • Generator
  • Spent fuel
  • Radioactive waste
  • Depleted uranium
  • Decommissioning
  • Sustainable energy
  • Nuclear proliferation
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