Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is inaccurate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Fallacious data spread on the web by anonymous sources has been rising causing the Internet to become unreliable.
This
has led many to be sceptical regarding a large chunk of the hyperspace and its authenticity. If questioned, I personally agree with this
notion to a major extent. My view is justified further
.
Out of several arguments, the foremost one to support my opinion is that the Internet is unrestricted. In other words
, in today's technology savvy
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self made
therefore
, the
netizens do it frequently and without any type of monitoring and censoring. Correct article usage
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As a result
, more and more people are exposed to unfiltered and dubious information
, which they believe easily. In fact, one survey revealed that more than 70% posts
on the Net are not based on truth.
Apart from that, Change preposition
of posts
the
social media gives users broadcasting ability. To reformulate, unlike earlier, anonymous individuals can gain Correct article usage
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huge
number of followers on their social media and possess an ability to influence them with their posts. In the past, mass communication was not possible or was limited to certain qualified individuals, Change the article
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whereas
today any person irrespective of their age, gender, social status, qualifications, or moral understanding can reach to
thousands or millions sometimes. Change preposition
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This
causes rumours, fake news, and wrong information
to spread faster than ever.
However
, I could not overlook the opposite side, too. Mainly, the
transparency has increased Correct article usage
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due to
the internet. This
is to say that anyone can refer to any websites
without any restrictions and only trust the official sources for reliable Fix the agreement mistake
website
information
. Moreover
, the multimedia increases the veracity of the news now more than ever. Earlier, only text-based news was published, but now video evidences are attached which makes it more certain.
To conclude
, although
all information
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I maintain to a large extent that, primarily, Add the comma(s)
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social media and lack of moral code, Correct article usage
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makes
the web Correct subject-verb agreement
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highly
unreliable place to gain Correct article usage
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information
. I personally believe,
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authenticity
of everything they consume off the web.Add an article
the authenticity
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