The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from, and the charts show how it was distributed. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and the charts show how it was distributed.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from, and the charts show how it was distributed. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and the charts show how it was distributed.
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table and pie charts provide data on the budget obtained by police and how
this
money
was distributed in a single location in Great Britain in the
years
2017 and 2018.
Overall
, what stands out from the table and charts is that in both
years
the highest amount of
money
(in millions of euros) was received from the national government and the lowest was received from grants like other sources.
However
, most percentages of
this
received
money
was spent on giving salaries to the office staff, and a small fraction used in technology.
To begin
with, in 2017 total
money
received was 304.7 million which slightly rose to 318.6 million in 2018. In both
years
majority of the
money
came from the national government earned from sources like grants was 38m in 2017 and rose only 0.5m in the final year.
Whereas
the majority of the
money
was spent on giving salary, in 2017, three-quarters
money
was spent on wages which declined by 6% in the next year.
While
, in 2017, only 8% was spent on technology which rose to almost double (14%) in the following year. The proportion of budget spent on building and transport remained the same which was 17% in both
years
.
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