The charts below show the percentage of people using private cars in five Australian cities between 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of people using private cars in five Australian cities between 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph depicts the modification in the percentage of people using private cars or public in five cities case in Australia over a 10-year period, starting from 2000.
overall
, it can be seen all of the lines have a similar trend upward, but there were details different in the lines.
for example
, Brisbane City rose from 15% to nearly 30% and
on the other hand
, it can be seen that Sydney City has risen from 20 to approximately 25% in 2010
while
others line in the cities have constant statistics of percentages using public cars.
however
, all of the cities have an upward trend in using private cars.
for instance
, Adelaide has a worse situation among all of them and has risen 20%
while
Perth city has risen from 50% to 60% in that same time. Melbourne has good policy transportation and has decreased from 30% to 20%.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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