The pie charts below show the sale of washing machines in Dyton Company in one decade. The bar graph is based on a survey conducted to measure the popularity of the products in this company between 1990 and 2000.
The pie charts illustrate the
market
share
of four washing machine companies in a 10 year
period (from 1990 to 2000), Add a hyphen
10-year
while
the graph shows the result of a survey that monitors the popularity of Dyton products over the same period.
Firstly
, it is obvious that in 1990 MMC had more than half of the market
share
(60% in total), which decreased significantly over the
time and in 2000, it accounted for only 39% of the Correct article usage
apply
market
share
. On the other hand
, Obecalp's market
share
was more steady and varied between 19 and 17 per cent over the period. Moreover
, Corr also
had almost the same results of 20% and 21% in the first 5 years, but from 1995 to 2000 it dropped dramatically to 12%. However
, Dyton only had 2% of the total market
share
and in 1995 it earned 8 per cent of it. This
was the lowest share
in that
5 years, but in 2000 there was a surprisingly high increase in Correct determiner usage
those
Dyton
Change noun form
Dyton's
market
share
and this
time the company had the second biggest
Add a hyphen
second-biggest
share
in the market
.
To sum up
, the popularity of this
company rose as its market
share
went up. As expected, in 2000 the company had the biggest rise in popularity.Submitted by Taha Sol. on
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