Some people think the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an ongoing debate over whether the government should allocate the

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budget to

science

domain education rather than other fields in order to develop the

country

.

Although

,

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it is crucial to progress

other

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in other

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subjects

owing to the wide

citizens

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citizen's

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knowledge, I am

the

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opinion that the investment

more

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money

to

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the

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science

study might

be improve

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the well-being of society, as well as 

economy

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the economy

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. Admittedly, there must be

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on

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other courses

due to

their inevitable effect

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the

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people's education. Take an

example

, (As an

example

of

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another subject is that) literature which maintains historical and cultural heritage of the

country

.

In other words

, ignoring the fields, including

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music, literature, art and history, contributes to the forgetting of them among the citizens, which leads to

lack

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of the horizon(experience ) of the individuals.

Additionally

, more and more people are involved in these fields;

as a consequence

(

consequently

only), slow progress on it(other

subjects

), leading(leads) to lessen the social mobility of corresponding profession (by) people.

Thus

, focusing on other

subjects

is crucial to maintaining society's knowledge and supporting individuals' financial well-being.

Nevertheless

,

science

is more crucial than other

subjects

, making it the most achievable field in terms of the

money

,

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of the

country

. With advent of the technology, the authorities allocate the budget of the

country

to the automated work in order to mitigate the production

money

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or time.

For

example

, Japan is the

country

which devotes its

money

to artificial intelligence, resulting

to

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the most developed government in

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Asia in terms of

the

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science

education.

Furthermore

,

country

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would spend more

money

to

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the

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biology, they would be able to find cures for different diseases, and

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country

would be able to export these medicines to various other countries, which would strengthen the host

country

's economy.

For

example

, to cure fatal viruses like

COVID

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COVID-19

, many countries invented different vaccines and sold them to other nations around the world. In conclusion,

while

the other

subjects

hold the culture of the

country

, I believe that the allocation

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budget to the

science

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contributes to the economy of the 

country

.