The chart below gives attendance figures for Grandville Stadium from 2017, which are projected through 2030 after a major improvement project. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The
given
bar chart gives data about how many Verb problem
apply
people
attended to
Grandville Change preposition
apply
stadium
in 2017 and 2020 and makes Capitalize word
Stadium
estimation
regarding how many Correct article usage
an estimation
people
will come to stadium
for different proposes after some improvements Add an article
the stadium
done
.
Add a missing verb
are done
Overall
, people
used stadium
for sporting Fix the agreement mistake
stadiums
events
mostly in both years 2017 and 2020. It seems sporting activities will be first
reason for Add an article
the first
go
to the Change the verb form
going
stadium
a decade later. People
less
likely to Add a missing verb
are less
watching
Wrong verb form
watch
Correct article usage
the theater
theater
in Change the spelling
theatre
stadium
and it is estimated that it won’t be as popular as other Add an article
the stadium
a stadium
activites
in 2030 too.
When we look at the theatre charts, it is obvious that theatre wasn’t a common activity among Correct your spelling
activities
citizien
and it seems like some improvements may Correct your spelling
citizen
citizens
will
increase Remove a modal verb
apply
number
of Change the article
the number
attendance
. Correct your spelling
attendees
However
it will not reach Add a comma
However,
sport
Change the noun form
sports
events
and concerts
levels.
Concert activities Change the noun form
concert
on the other hand
, it was more popular in 2020 than as
it was in 2017. When developments are done, it will make huge differences Correct word choice
apply
on
concert Change preposition
in
attendences
. In Correct your spelling
attendances
attendance
long term
projection it it will reach over 100.000 attendance in 2030.
Joining Add a hyphen
long-term
sportintg
Correct your spelling
sporting
events
in Grandville stadium
was common
leisure activity among Grandville Correct article usage
a common
citizien
. Approximately 150.000 Correct your spelling
citizen
citizens
people
went the
Change preposition
to the
stadium
for sporting events
in 2017 and 2020. However
, these numbers won’t change after ten years. It is estimated that number
of attendance will Change the article
a number
the number
rose
slightly in 2030.Wrong verb form
rise
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