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The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
 bar chart depicts
oil
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 production capacity for several
gulf
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 countries, it is clear from the graph that
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Saudi Arabia is the highest.
According to
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Shawn, in 1990
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Saudi Arabia
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 the highest nearly 9 per cent.
In addition
, Iran and Iraq, Kuwait
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 the same
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result
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 about 4%.
To sum up
, we could say that Qatar
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lowest
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the lowest
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 oil production capacity
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 1%, and
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saudi arabia is the highest
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 15 percent.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • estimated
  • oil production capacity
  • Gulf countries
  • period between 1990 and 2010
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • significant increase
  • decrease
  • relatively stable
  • overall trend
  • highest production capacity
  • lowest production capacity
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