The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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percentage
of Add an article
the percentage
population
in Correct article usage
the Phlippines
Phlippines
,Malaysia,Correct your spelling
Philippines
Thailand
and Indonesia in the years
between 1970 and 2020. In addition
, the graph shows estimated
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the estimated
population
in 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, all population
in these different countries have a Fix the agreement mistake
populations
tendeny
to Correct your spelling
tendency
growing
. It seems Malaysia will reach Wrong verb form
grow
peak
and Correct pronoun usage
its peak
Thailand
will have smallest
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the smallest
population
in the year 2040.
On one
hand, Correct article usage
the one
Indonasia
made Correct your spelling
Indonesia
smallest
contribution to Change the article
the smallest
Asian
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the Asian
population
among cities by
approximately 15% at the Change preposition
apply
beggining
. Correct your spelling
beginning
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However,
population
grew gradually over the years
and besides
it will be Correct word choice
apply
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country in 2040 Add an article
a secondary
the secondary
according to
estimations. One
the other hand, Correct your spelling
On
Thailand
had secondary
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a secondary
population
in 1970 and showed an increase. However
if predictions Add a comma
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will
occur, it will have Verb problem
apply
smallest
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the smallest
population
comparing others in 2040.
When we look at the
Malaysia, its growing trends are analogous to Correct article usage
apply
Thailand
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the paramount
with
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in
Philippines
at the Correct article usage
the Philippines
beggining
. Over the Correct your spelling
beginning
years
, its popultion
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population
have
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has
grew
.Change the verb form
grown
More over
, people think that its Correct your spelling
Moreover
population
make up 80% of total
Asian Add an article
the total
population
in 2040 consequently
it will be the firstly
one. Philippines
remained Correct article usage
The Philippines
its
number of people Change the word
the
whp
lived there Correct your spelling
who
in
between 1970 and 1980. Its Change preposition
apply
population
climbed from 1980 to 1990. Despite this
, it fell down over twenty years
sligtly
. After 2010 Correct your spelling
slightly
population
was
started to Unnecessary verb
apply
growing
. Wrong verb form
grow
Furthermore
, according to
estimations it will continue to growing
and may Wrong verb form
grow
will
be the secondary country by making up 60% of Correct your spelling
well
total
Asian Add an article
the total
population
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