The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph represents data regarding
percentage
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the percentage
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of
population
in
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the Phlippines
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Phlippines
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Philippines
,Malaysia,
Thailand
and Indonesia in the
years
between 1970 and 2020.
In addition
, the graph shows
estimated
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the estimated
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population
in 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, all
population
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populations
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in these different countries have a
tendeny
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tendency
to
growing
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grow
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. It seems Malaysia will reach
peak
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its peak
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and
Thailand
will have
smallest
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the smallest
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population
in the year 2040. On
one
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the one
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hand,
Indonasia
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Indonesia
made
smallest
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the smallest
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contribution to
Asian
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the Asian
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population
among cities
by
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apply
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approximately 15% at the
beggining
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beginning
.
However
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However,
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its
population
grew gradually over the
years
and
besides
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it will be
secondary
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a secondary
the secondary
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country in 2040
according to
estimations.
One
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On
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the other hand,
Thailand
had
secondary
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a secondary
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smallest
population
in 1970 and showed an increase.
However
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However,
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if predictions
will
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occur, it will have
smallest
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the smallest
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population
comparing others in 2040. When we look at
the
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apply
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Malaysia, its growing trends are analogous to
Thailand
's. It was
paramount
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a paramount
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city
with
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in
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Philippines
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the Philippines
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at the
beggining
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beginning
. Over the
years
, its
popultion
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population
have
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has
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grew
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grown
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.
More over
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Moreover
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, people think that its
population
make up 80% of
total
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the total
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Asian
population
in 2040
consequently
it will be the
firstly
one.
Philippines
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The Philippines
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remained
its
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the
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number of people
whp
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who
lived there
in
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apply
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between 1970 and 1980. Its
population
climbed from 1980 to 1990. Despite
this
, it fell down over twenty
years
sligtly
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slightly
. After 2010
population
was
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started to
growing
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grow
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.
Furthermore
,
according to
estimations it will continue to
growing
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grow
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and may
will
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well
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be the secondary country by making up 60% of
total
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the total
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Asian
population
.
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