The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The diagram illustrates the

water

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cycle

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, the constant movement of

water

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on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

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, the 5-step

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begins with the

evaporation

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of

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in the

ocean

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and

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with the runoff of surface

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.

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is achieved by the return of

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into the

ocean

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and

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continue

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evaporation

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of

water

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into the air

according to

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the

cycle

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. The process starts with the

evaporation

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of

ocean

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water

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into the air, which

provide

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about 80% of

total

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water

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vapour in

air

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the air

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. After the

evaporation

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, the

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then

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continues with the condensation that

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changes

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the

water

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vapour to the liquid

water

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. When they have condensed

water

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vapour to liquid

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, the

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can continue the process with the formation of the cloud. At the step of precipitation, the cloud will

then

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release

the

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liquid in the form of rain and snow, which can

be

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either

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flows

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into the lake or

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flows

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flow

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overland, which is called runoff. The process of runoff can be considered as the

last

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step of

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water

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the water

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cycle

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,

water

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that

flows

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on the ground will seep down and become groundwater that will

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flows

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into the

ocean

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and continue the

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cycle

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.