The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph indicates the average number of people who have taken four sports between 1985 and 2005.
Overall
, tennis significantly increases more than others; alternatively, rugby dramatically decreases at the same moment. Linking Words
However
, badminton and basketball are more similar.
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To begin
with, the most popular sport is tennis in the first given year it started with just only 150% and gradually rose every year until 2005 that supper peak time which was around 245%. Linking Words
On the other hand
, the number in the same period rugby begins at 250%, counting as the most popular; Linking Words
in contrast
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this
sport had a significant drop every age to recently time just 50%.
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In addition
, badminton in 1985 had people taking it circa 50% Linking Words
while
tennis had close to 100%. Linking Words
Moreover
, both sports reduced in the same moment in 1990 with approximately 80 and 40%, in the figure2005 badminton is in demand with some 50% Linking Words
also
basketball which nearly by 70%.Linking Words
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