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The graph below shows the percentage of urban/suburban and rural households in a certain country that had Internet access between 2011 and 2016. Summarize1 the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Household Internet Access 60% "'1'1'""-;::==============::::;----------2011 2012 2013 2014 2015 2016

The graph below shows the percentage of urban/suburban and rural households in a certain country that had Internet access between 2011 and 2016. Summarize1 the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Household Internet Access 60% "'1'1'""-;::==============::::;----------2011 2012 2013 2014 2015 2016
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The chart illustrates data concerning the amount of accessibility to
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the internet
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internet
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Internet
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 in cities and rural areas
in
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particular
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a particular
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 nation, during the period of 2011 to 2016. From
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overall
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an overall
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 perspective, it is clearly
evient
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evident
 that
accessability
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access
 to
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the internet
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internet
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Internet
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 in both rural
an
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and
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 urban/suburban areas rose dramatically.
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However
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However,
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 the gap between them increased slightly.
According to
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 the chart, the figure for urban/suburban regions started from almost 15% in 1999 and
then
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 enhanced significantly to half by 2002 ,
fter
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after
 that ,continued its growth
gradualy
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gradually
 just by about 5% more in approximately 55% and
reach
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reached
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 the peak by 2004.
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, the percentage for rural regions
initially
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 stood at about 2% and
then
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surge
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surged
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 to somewhere in the vicinity of 35% and
reach
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reached
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 climax by 2004.
Furthermore
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, the initial gap between
two
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the two
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figure
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 were almost 12% in 1999, but it had
a
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 upswing to 19% by 2004.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • urban/suburban households
  • rural households
  • Internet access
  • 2011
  • 2016
  • increase
  • significantly lower
  • trend
  • gap
  • narrowed
  • advancements
  • technology
  • accessibility
  • reduced costs
  • government
  • private sector
  • initiatives
  • improve
  • infrastructure
  • contributed
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