The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates the
number
of visitors
per month to three different London Museums (British
Museum
, Science Museum
, and Natural History Museum
) from June to September 2013. Overall
, three museums experienced a fluctuation, while
the British
Museum
reached the highest number
of visitors
throughout the period.
In June, the number
of British
Museum
visitors
was approximately 600,000 people, slightly higher than the Science Museum
's 100,000. The British
Museum
's number
then
rose significantly over a month, reaching nearly 800,000 in July, which gradually decreased in the following month to around 500,000 people. In contrast
, the Science Museum
's attendance fell steadily from June to August, then
slightly increased to around 450,000 people in September.
In addition
, the number
of visitors
to the Natural History Museum
marked a decline from the beginning to the middle of the period to about 400,000 attendees, while
it started to grow to approximately 420,00 visitors
at the end
of the period.Submitted by anggiagni on
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