The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
per month to three different London Museums (Use synonyms
British
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Museum
, Science Use synonyms
Museum
, and Natural History Use synonyms
Museum
) from June to September 2013. Use synonyms
Overall
, three museums experienced a fluctuation, Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
British
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Museum
reached the highest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
throughout the period.
In June, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
British
Use synonyms
Museum
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visitors
was approximately 600,000 people, slightly higher than the Science Use synonyms
Museum
's 100,000. The Use synonyms
British
Use synonyms
Museum
's Use synonyms
number
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then
rose significantly over a month, reaching nearly 800,000 in July, which gradually decreased in the following month to around 500,000 people. Linking Words
In contrast
, the Science Linking Words
Museum
's attendance fell steadily from June to August, Use synonyms
then
slightly increased to around 450,000 people in September.
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In addition
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
to the Natural History Use synonyms
Museum
marked a decline from the beginning to the middle of the period to about 400,000 attendees, Use synonyms
while
it started to grow to approximately 420,00 Linking Words
visitors
Use synonyms
at the end
of the period.Linking Words
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