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The chart below shows the annual rice production in 4 countries in 1995,2005,2015

The chart below shows the annual rice production in 4 countries in 1995,2005,2015
The graph illustrates the annual
rice
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production
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 in countries A, B, C, and D for the years 1995, 2005, and 2015.
It is clear that
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country
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 B had the highest
rice
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production
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 in 2015.
Additionally
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, there was a slight increase in
rice
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production
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 in
country
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 A in 2005, which continued to rise in 2015. In 1995,
country
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 A had the highest annual
rice
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production
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, reaching 45
million
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tonnes
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.
In contrast
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,
country
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 D had the lowest
production
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 at 2
million
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tonnes
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.
Country
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 B ranked second with 35
million
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tonnes
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, significantly higher than
country
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 C, which produced 5
million
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tonnes
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. In 2005,
country
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 A’s
production
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 rose slightly to 46
million
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tonnes
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 and continued to increase gradually, reaching 50
million
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tonnes
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 by 2015.
Country
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 B’s
production
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 rose significantly to 47
million
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tonnes
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 in 2005 but decreased slightly to 42
million
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tonnes
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 in 2015.
Country
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 C’s
production
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 saw a modest increase to 6
million
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tonnes
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 in 2005, followed by a gradual decline to 4
million
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tonnes
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 in 2015.
Country
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 D’s
production
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 remained unchanged at 2
million
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tonnes
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 in 2005 but rose slowly to 3
million
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tonnes
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 by 2015.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rice, production, country, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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