The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the location of
dance
Use synonyms
classes
, Use synonyms
while
the accompanying bar chart compares the contribution of two age groups in three types of Linking Words
dance
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classes
.
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Overall
, the majority of Linking Words
dance
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classes
are held in private studios, with Use synonyms
children
under the age of 11 being more interested in ballet Use synonyms
classes
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, modern dancing is the most sought-after dancing class among teenagers.
Looking at the location of Linking Words
dance
Use synonyms
classes
in more detail, almost half of them are held in private studios, followed by after-school Use synonyms
dance
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classes
in school halls making up one-fourth of the total locations. Meanwhile, only 18% of the Use synonyms
classes
are held in community halls, and college-based studios Use synonyms
comprises
only 10%.
Regarding different types of Change the verb form
comprise
classes
, it is obvious that the younger group find ballet to be more interesting, with 600 participants. The figure for Use synonyms
this
type of class is halved in the Linking Words
teenager
group. Replace the word
teenage
In contrast
, Linking Words
while
over 500 Linking Words
children
, aged11-16 participate in modern Use synonyms
dance
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classes
, only 300 Use synonyms
children
aged under 11 opt for these Use synonyms
classes
. Use synonyms
However
, relatively the same number of Linking Words
children
from both groups are registered in tap dancing Use synonyms
classes
, with over 400 participants in each groupUse synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dance, classes, children with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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