The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the percentages of
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population
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the population
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with different habits in drinking
coffee
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or tea in five
cities
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in Australia.
It is clear that
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the preferences of
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population
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the population
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for fresh
coffee
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, instant
coffee
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, and going to a cafe in all five
cities
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exhibited the same pattern, with more than half of the people preferring a cafe for
coffee
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or tea.
However
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, fresh
coffee
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is the least popular choice
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the information. In Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart, the percentages of
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population
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the population
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who went to a cafe in
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last
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four weeks all exceeded 60% but were under 65%,
while
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the figure for Brisbane and Adelaide were around 55% and 50%, respectively. Meanwhile, in these three
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cities
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the consumption of fresh
coffee
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was higher than that of the other two, with over 35% in the former group and under 35% in the latter one. It is noticeable that the variations in the proportions of people who choose instant
coffee
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are not obvious among these
cities
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. Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart had more than 50% of
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population
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the population
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drinking instant
coffee
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, and Sydney and Melbourne showed lower percentages which were slightly under 50%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, coffee, cities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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