The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the percentages of
population
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the population
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with different habits in drinking
coffee
or tea in five
cities
in Australia.
It is clear that
the preferences of
population
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for fresh
coffee
, instant
coffee
, and going to a cafe in all five
cities
exhibited the same pattern, with more than half of the people preferring a cafe for
coffee
or tea.
However
, fresh
coffee
is the least popular choice
according to
the information. In Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart, the percentages of
population
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the population
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who went to a cafe in
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four weeks all exceeded 60% but were under 65%,
while
the figure for Brisbane and Adelaide were around 55% and 50%, respectively. Meanwhile, in these three
cities
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the consumption of fresh
coffee
was higher than that of the other two, with over 35% in the former group and under 35% in the latter one. It is noticeable that the variations in the proportions of people who choose instant
coffee
are not obvious among these
cities
. Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart had more than 50% of
population
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the population
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drinking instant
coffee
, and Sydney and Melbourne showed lower percentages which were slightly under 50%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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