The bar chart compares the total number of vehicles per one thousand people in China who owns a car in the years 1987 to 1999.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart compares the total number of vehicles per one thousand people in China who owns a car in the years 1987 to 1999.
give some information about how much total of the cars used in China for 12 years from 1987 to 1999.
If we look
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the trends, we
saw
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that there was a significant increasing of people
that
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who
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bought a vehicle in China. Especially
in
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1993 to 1995 which
show
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a sharp
rocketed
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up of the number.
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