the bar chart below shows the number of miles travelled in a year by a men and woman for six different purposes in a particular country. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. task 1
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The bar chart demonstrates how many
miles
women and men
covered for various purposes encompassing day
trips
, entertainment, meeting friends, taking children to school, shopping and work
in a year.
Overall
, women surpassed men
in all mileage trips
except day
trips
, work
and entertainment. Both males and females do fewer day
trips
compared to other trips
. Significantly, the majority of both genders travel for work
followed by shopping.
According to
the graph, ladies spend around 7000 miles
for a day
trip whereas
men
cover approximately 10000 miles
in a year. For work
, males travel 35000 miles
and females travel 30000 miles
. In view of entertainment, men
exhibited a mileage of around 15000 and women with slightly over 10000 miles
.
However
, meeting friends, taking children to school and shopping were dominated by females in a year with 25000 miles
, 27000 miles
and 30000 miles
, respectively and in contrast
, meeting friends, taking children to school and shopping done by men
was 22000 , 26000 and 28000 miles
.Submitted by drnivyamohan1992 on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words miles, men, day, trips, work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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