Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some
people
are keen on eating outside the Use synonyms
home
, Use synonyms
while
others admire cooking at Linking Words
home
. Use synonyms
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essay will clarify both points of view Linking Words
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due
to why Change preposition
as
this
is the case and the reasons I prefer homemade foods.
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To begin
with, Linking Words
people
who like to eat at restaurants rather than at Use synonyms
home
believe it is the best Use synonyms
way
for Use synonyms
time
management. Use synonyms
In other words
, they can eat their meal rapidly and Linking Words
then
just continue their job or activity in a normal Linking Words
way
without thinking Use synonyms
what
to eat. Change preposition
about what
Moreover
, eating out allows Linking Words
people
to complete their lives in a Use synonyms
sample
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simple
way
, especially Use synonyms
for
those who are working for a long Change preposition
apply
time
. Use synonyms
In
instance, Change preposition
For
people
working in the medical sector as doctors or nurses have less Use synonyms
time
for breaks; Use synonyms
therefore
, it is a challenge to cook by themselves.
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However
, the other group, which contains me, leans more to eat at Linking Words
home
. Use synonyms
This
is because in most cases, most Linking Words
food
preparation is done at Use synonyms
home
, we know each type of ingredient in the meal, and we Use synonyms
also
have a guarantee about clean Linking Words
food
and less risk of health problems as poison Use synonyms
food
, unless you order Use synonyms
food
from outside the Use synonyms
home
. Use synonyms
In addition
, we will purchase things that we care about from where to come. Linking Words
Also
, we will read specific ideas that were written Linking Words
in
Change preposition
on
packaging
. Correct article usage
the packaging
For example
, parents know exactly what their child needs; as mothers choose Linking Words
food
for many reasons—do they have obesity, allergies, etc.—so mothers cook Use synonyms
food
in what their child’s body requires.
In conclusion, some Use synonyms
people
prefer to eat homemade meals, Use synonyms
whereas
other Linking Words
people
do not have Use synonyms
time
to cook by themselves. Eating at Use synonyms
home
is the best Use synonyms
way
to promote your health and strengthen your body. In my opinion, it is better to eat what you are cooking, as it is more healthy.Use synonyms
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task achievement
Try to provide more specific examples and elaboration to strengthen the support for your points.
coherence cohesion
Work on improving the logical flow between paragraphs to enhance coherence.
task achievement
You've clearly presented your preference and provided a conclusion that ties back to your main point.
coherence cohesion
Introduction and conclusion are both present and make clear reference to the main topic.