Some say Parents should be the one to make their children a good citizen in society. Others say it also the duty of schools. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Some people believe that
parents
should teach their children
how to become good citizens
in society
. However
, others believe that it is the duty of schools
to teach children
how to become good citizens
. I personally believe that while
schools
provide effective education
specially designated for children
, parents
should teach children
to make them good members of society
because children
spend more time
with their parents
than in schools
.
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school
Schools
provide effective education
about how to become a good member of society
to children
which is especially designated for them. This
age-appropriate education
method prepares children
to act as good citizens
. Most importantly, this
education
teaches them about what attributes they should have to become a good citizen
. For example
, in Bangladesh, children
in grade five at schools
study a course named "Social Norms
' which teaches children
about the attributes of a responsible citizen
. This
course teaches children
through play and practical work which they find entertaining and funny. However
, I personally believe that parents
are the best options
to teach Fix the agreement mistake
option
children
this
topic because children
spend more time
with their parents
than in schools
.
Children
spend more time
with their parents
than in schools
. From the age Fix the agreement mistake
school
zero
to four, Change preposition
of zero
children
spend most of their time
with their parents
at home. This
period is the best time
to teach children
values, norms
, good behaviours, customs and languages. Being a good citizen
of society
also
requires these norms
and behaviours and therefore
, children
easily learn those norms
from their parents
at their early ages. For example
, in India, children
while
spending time
with their parents
learn social and familial norms
in their homes before enrolling in schools
. This learnings
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This learning
These learnings
also
effective and have a lasting impact on Add a missing verb
is also
children
. Therefore
, I believe that children
should learn how to become good citizens
from their parents
.
In conclusion, I believe that children
should learn how to become a good citizen
from their parents
because they spend more time
with their parents
than in schools
. Fix the agreement mistake
school
Schools
are also
good options in this
regard, however
, they only provide knowledge from books, which do not provide norms
and behaviours.Submitted by rahman_rehana on
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Consider strengthening your conclusion to encapsulate both sides of the argument before reinforcing your opinion, providing a well-rounded end to your essay.
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Improve on providing more balanced arguments for each viewpoint, ensuring equal depth and analysis on why schools are also vital in teaching societal values.
introduction conclusion present
The essay provides a clear introduction that sets up the discussion effectively.
logical structure
Logical structure is maintained throughout, moving neatly from one argument to the next.
relevant specific examples
Useful examples were used to highlight the role of both schools and parents.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.