The chart below gives information about the percentages of overweight men and women in Australia between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart compares Australian
males
and females
in terms of each gender’s overweight proportion from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
, males
were more likely to be found overweight than females
, with a higher ratio
of overweight males
than that of females
shown each decade
. In 1980 and 2000, the differences between the two genders were the most noticeable, while
in 1990 and 2010, the gaps narrowed.
The year 1980 witnessed 28% of female Australian residents were
overweight, almost half of their male counterparts’ Wrong verb form
being
ratio
at 52%. In the next decade
, from the year 1990, a 5% increase in overweight men and a 10% increase in the overweight ratio
of women weakened the sheer contrast between the ratios found in the last
decade
. The overweight ratio
surged by another 20% for males
in 2000, which
the change doubled the amount for Correct word choice
and
females
, bringing the difference between the two genders visible again. The difference reversed in 2010, distinctive from 1990, while
the female ratio
remained the same as the last
decade
, the ratio
for males
reduced by 5%, at 49% for females
and 65% for males
.
In conclusion, overweight problems became more prevalent among both men and women in Australia in these forty years, even though the difference in ratios between the two genders was less discerning in the last
decade
compared with the beginning.Submitted by wusiying2001 on
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